Prosthesis #21 /P

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This was great! Jon is sadly...breaking. It seems as though he won't last much longer. At first this therapy was helping him now, it's desroying him!

He's having a lot of feelings that I've never seen from him before and his responces are taking me by surprise. I hate Dr. Haaser for doing this to him, but he is such a wonderful character.

And then we go into electroshock therapy, which is my favorite kind of minipulative therapy! He'll speak aloud correct? While being zapped by a small bit of electricity at the temple. I think that's how it happens anyway. Oh, I can't wait for the next! Awesome job on this Brad, I'm feeling major character changes and developments!

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Jesus, we he trying to rip Jon's heart out?
we he=was he

"How does that make you feel?"
YES! Exactly what I wanted to see XD

Had he been crying or said that before?
or sad?

The ETC is scary... reminds me of One Flew Over the CooCoo's nest or The Bell Jar (I think there was ECT in that...)

This is so f*cked up. I love it!
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