Thy Interview

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shmegan bob's back
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Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:25 pm
shmegan bob's back says... · Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:25 pm
Thou shalt not interview thysely...

Thou shalt show the entire maneuver...

Thou shalt not covet the Jet Sky...

Thou shalt compromise thy soundtrack...

Thou shalt not wheelie air...

Thou shalt not tow-at...
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Emerson
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Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:47 am
Emerson says... · Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:47 am
I....don't think this is a poem. And 'thysely' isn't a word.

You repeated "thou shalt not", ended each sentence with, '...' and it made no sense, and, yeah, like I said, isn't really a poem.

But uh, nice try?
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Sarahcat210
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:32 am
Sarahcat210 says... · Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:32 am
shmegan bob's back wrote:
Thou shalt compromise thy soundtrack...


I love all of it, but my favorite is the soundtrack part *laughs* :wink:

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Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:34 pm
Incandescence says... · Thu Apr 26, 2007 2:34 pm
shmegan bob's back:


Even if this were a serious attempt at literary allusion (for your sake, I'll assume it wasn't), it doesn't begin to meet the bare minimum for the namesake of "poetry."


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