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Roya is confused, but she watches Alice's arrow fly and land next to Bella.

"That JUST missed me. Be more careful, will you?"

She runs over to Bella to see what the hubbub is all about.

Oh, and Matt, if you're still sending out templates, please can I have one?
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Roya Adam is supposed to be sending out templates, but as far as i can tell he hasn't sent any yet. I WANT ONE!
I just lost the game.




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"ALICE! I CAN HEAR YOU!!! I MADE THAT CLEAR WAY EARLIER, pay more attention will you..." Bells grumbled the last part to herself. "Come on Roya, I think they're that way! ALICE WHICH WAY ARE YOU!!!???"

Bella also uses telepathy to contact matt, and promises to smack him next time she sees him. haha.
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Nutty turns to find skell, rather red in the face, standing behind her.
"Ah. so they let you in I see!" Nutty frowned. "where's matt?"
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.




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Alice again apologizes to Skell for leaving his name out, but he never said anything!


"BELLA WE'RE THIS WAY!!!" Alice shoots another arrow to prove her point.
I just lost the game.




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"Ahh!" Bella jumps out of the way and lets the arrow scrape Roya's head, making one of those funny bald lines you see on cartoons. Bells struggles not to laugh at Roya and shouts back to Alice. "YOU COULD HAVE SAID NORTH SOUTH EAST WEST LEFT OR RIGHT! THE ARROW WAS AS UNNECESSARY WASTE OF A WEAPON!!! If you die from lack of weapon, i'll blame yoU!" bella stops shouting and runs in the direction the arrow came from, still not sure which was it is.
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[bubblewrapped] is now thoroughly lost, and passes the time by singing to herself.

That's the beauty of adventure/the trembling and the dread! I cant think of another thing I'd rather do instead!
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Adam types mindlessly at the computer pad. his mind vacatued to the nearest community college.

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I'm SOOOOO Sorry guys. It's the last few weeks of the semester and i am scrambleing at the moment. My computer has been on the fritz and i'm still working a few things out with the templates. When I finish they will be sent, promise but i have to get through this college thing first.
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Alice would explain to Bubble what was going on if she had any good way of explaining things to people. She can't even explain that right.

"BELLA!!! FOLLOW THE SOUND OF MY VOICE!!!" Then AJ continues to shout random things, including French at Bella.




Tis okay Adam, Collage can be stressful, just get them done fast
I just lost the game.




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Roya leads Bella towards Alice and they meet up miles from the ship. There's absolutely nothing in sight and it's starting to get dark.

"Great. Now what?" Roy says.

Yeah, do all your schoolwork first. We don't want you to fail! *obviously author's not ready, though, as she spelled it collage...*
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AJ is out of ideas, and decides to light a fire. "They'll find us eventually, if not..." her voice trails off but comes back in an optimistic tone, "if not we'll find them!"
I just lost the game.




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Roya pulls some blankets out of thin air and they make camp waiting for the rest of the group, which seems to have disappeared into thin air. Something russles in the bushes.

"oh my god what was that?!"

Alice shruggs and the bush shakes again.
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Alice notices the bush and shruggs again, nothing happened. It wasn't her.
I just lost the game.




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Bella realizes that she missed a lot, and smacks Alice for not giving her the DL at school, and for shouting in French when she can hardly speak it as it is. (lolz). Bella is too hyper to sleep and suddenly remembers that Matt and Skell went thata way...she still is disoriented iwth her north south east west left and right thing. Bella runs off to find them, with a flashlight that she made out of thin air.


*Have fun with college Adam...tehehehe*
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"Oh carp, come on guys lets go get her."

Alice groans as she gets up to follow Bella.
I just lost the game.



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