the im, should be like this- I'm, no matter what part of the sentence it comes in. and my normal thing with the period and comma in the wrong places.
“I told you all fucking along! He wouldn’t not come back you stupid bitch telling me that he would,”.
I'll let you figure this one out.
Another great contribution to the story! Keep it up!
-JC
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett
This piece was a bit rushed. You didn't spend to much time on the detail of what was actually happening. I am really curious as to why his mom was crying. I am also confused as to why the present Jamiy hates Rob. He seems to love Rob right now. Even though the piece was rushed, it was good. I still want to keep reading.
It doesn't think, doesn't feel. It doesn't laugh or cry. All it does from dusk 'till dawn is make the soldiers die
