Prosthesis #12 /P

Removed.

Very suspenseful! I'm liking Nicholas a lot.

My friends, however, they do not share my taste in elegance.

This is kind of cliché. Oh no, I would never kill you, but I can't say the same for ol' Brutus here. :p

The dialogue is my favorite part of your writing. I can tell who's talking because the character's personality shows through in every line. There's not a word extra. Have I said that before? I think so, actually.

Hehe, I wonder what comes next.

-Jane

This was wonderful! I could actually apply my element knowledge to know what you were talking about. *feels proud*

Nicholas is mean but also a really fun character I like the way he made the Ms. Clinton react and how she agreed. I can really imagine that happening considering our president would save his butt over ours any day. lol

And now I have another waiting to read! Loved it Bradness!

~Rieda

"Ms. Clinton,"

Is she not married? I am not too clear on these things, but then should it not be Mrs. Clinton? I may be wrong.

You know, I feel so wrong reading this online. It's too good to be online. *sobs* It better get published...

Was good; shall I say more?

holy snoot. I'm really enjoying this.

I feel i should say more but i cant see anything new to comment