Yours Sweet Sounds

Your sweet sounds get me by.
They're what makes me feel alive,
and for those blue eyes ill always try.
You shed a tear and my blood runs dry.

I can tell when your down, your sweet sounds give you away.
and when your trying to pretend that your not angry..
your sweet sounds they do betray.

I can tell when your trully happy for im at your oceans depth.
You tell me more than 2 hour movies,
with a subtle tone of comfort under your breath.
I only have my sweet words and i just write them on your wall,
but you somehow tell me in greater detail without moving your lips at all.

Im a radio out of tune, picking up a station no one hears.
you used to give me the happiest moments but now they are running into years.
i could write a million books about it,
because your language knows no bounds.
lets do a trade for life...my sweet words for your sweet sounds.
The End

Want me to be truly honest? This was really good. The only problem that I would have in it are some few errors that are really not that big of a deal. Just remember to always capatilize "i".

Yeah i usually skip over puntuation and capatilizing letters....my bad

that was amazing.
real good.
and yeah it's okay the puntuation is something me most skip over. heh.

That was really really good. Though the punctuation/capitilisation kind of distracted me [especially when some of it is correct grammar and some of it isn't] I liked it overall despite that.

Im a radio out of tune, picking up a station no one hears <--- this was my favourite line.