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This would be...Ralian's world, Pros?

'Tis an interesting map. It reminds me somewhat of Europe's western coast.




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I'm suprised that you remembered. Yep. It's Ralian's map. I have about thirty more that I'll post as soon as I get the chance.
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Oy, how could I forget Ralian? He and Livny made too noticeable a scene in the Character Answer to easily slip any mind. ^_~

But then, I've also read the character profiles on SBS. ^_^ Will you post some Ralian's story ever, or for the moment, merely maps?
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no, this is only for maps. I'm actually going to take a break from the Foreigner Redemption for months, and get Rach done.
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Cool map!

I think I need to brush up on your chracters :)
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Islan and the east of Ranii look a little empty, as does the south of Elion. Dunno what you can do about it, though. :D

However, I would suggest moving the compass (or the legend) into the top left region--at the moment it looks very bottom-heavy.

Nice work!




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I LOVE FANTASY MAPS. maybe you should try colouring them? Watercolour would be good. Or adding a bit more detail to make them more visually exciting. Cool maps though x
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The third one doesn't look as good as the first two, and I'd agree with Imp: it looks like Europe.
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Good maps but I agree that some colour would be nice and perhaps some sort of the symbol where the tows are. Just a little something that resembles buildings would do.
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Poor Imp wrote:But then, I've also read the character profiles on SBS. ^_^ Will you post some Ralian's story ever, or for the moment, merely maps?


Prosithion wrote:no, this is only for maps. I'm actually going to take a break from the Foreigner Redemption for months, and get Rach done.



... you could draw up a roadmap of 1950s Vienna, you know? ;)




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LOL! Yes, more colors would be nice. But I must say, you are very very dedicated to your story. :D
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The first does, indeed, have a shape reminiscent of the Iberian peninsula! ^_^ It's the best of the lot, I think; the other two are a little... sketchy. :lol:
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