Hey, this is my first poem posted please tell me what you think
The untouched water hitting the shore
brand new rain drops knocking on my door
No leaves fallen
Nothing dead to step on
Nature writes it's poem
As the birds start to hum
II
When I walked in the path
the spring wind sang to me
I could hear it over the
birds wings flapping
it sang, about what I breath
about what feeds the orange flowers
I looked for the voice , right over a rose bush
then it stopped and became extremly hot
III
When I look up and feel summer's touch
The warm hands with no hard clutch
the toes nicely sink into the sand
while I stand and look 'round
I see the the limitless coulours of
blues, greens and the forever golden sun
the sun falls asleep;
the rain revives
welcoming fall again
IV
I look on summer and it's
sad farewell
but the fall colours colours convince me
to be happy; and it tries it's best
holding back, but the leafs fall
down,down,down
Softer than rain; it cures my pain
makes my frown go
up,up,up
And Autumm falls away
V
Winter has begun yet there is no snow
the rain gives the earth a nice cold shower
so we run and hide under shelter
Because we don't wanna see the earth naked
Once the shower it over
the earth dries itself itself with it's cold white towel
we lay in the towel then
break it apart and throw it at each other
Until there's none left, winter ends and the sun
burns away the clouds
VI
After that the night started to glow
And I watched the flowers turn to stone
Nature finished writting it's poem
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