Uh poem abut jebus

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ON MANY SECOND THOUGHTS IT DOES RHYME THEREFORE ITSA POEM LOOK UP POEM IN THE DICTONARY IT MEANS SINGSONG THAT RHYMES AND MEANS FEELINGS.

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It's still disgusting and offending. And besides, we're not grammar NAZIS (get your terms right, baka), it just makes a poem all the more painful to read with appalling grammar and spelling.
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Okay, what with the random spamming of the author, the whole off-topic and not-commenting-on-the-poem-but-the-ideas-presented-ness, and the whole everybody getting offended, this isn't really worth staying open. Sorry.

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Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins