Other Fiction is just for stories. There's a forum for artwork too. *moved to art forum*
I love the boy's face, especially his eyes and nose. The line work looks easy, and relaxed. The background, above his head is also really pretty.
his legs look a little short, proportionally. Also, if the wings are literal, they'd have to be a lot bigger to be able to hold him up without him constantly flapping them.
Really nice shading, it makes him look 3-D. Is that colored pencil? Pastel? Some of the background looks kind of like crayon. Maybe you could add a little shading to the wings?
The text looks a little out of place, but I like how you wrote it, with the arrows.
Thanks for posting!
-Jenna
Jennafina's Love Your Body Already Dammit Campaign
This is actually really good; I'm five years older than you, and I don't draw that well.
My only big crit. is that you really shouldn't have !s in the title, and especially not a lot of them. (Also, his pants/shoes look a little funky, but that's not such a big deal.)
I like it, but I think it should maybe be a little more professional. However, I am not big on anime so this could be what normal anime covers look like and I wouldn't know it.
You're doing well so far. I love the front cover and I haven't had time to properly read the begginning yet, but I have scanned and it looks pretty good! PM me when you do more.
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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