the touch of life

The only thing
I could bring,
Is faith and trust.
You must pave your way
Through the dust.
I could bring
Joy to a young heart.
I could bring happiness to an ill,
But Im not the cure only a pill.
My love is only a figment,
A lie.
Ive tryed to find
Who am I.
Im a friend,
One to know is always there.
I know where
I stand,
Always there
Only to lend a Hand.

Mkay. This actually DOES a have a good backround, plot, idea, WHATEVER you wanna call it. The only thing I would suggest is that you watch your punctuation and spelling errors.

Be sure to proofread your work before posting.

Other than that, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, and now I'm off to the next!

*~AqUaRiUs AnGeL~*

Another great one! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see more.

SC