"In the life, exist two ways" - why not say "two ways exist". It's much simpler, I see no need to make it unnecessarily archaic. Also, why is it "the" life?
"Both Light and Dark, kind’s ways that can to have several reasons for acquire" - that makes no sense at all. I have no idea what you are trying to say.
"Much light like Dark to depends one of the other" - ditto.
"and anywhere is the light always is the dark" - ditto.
"you never can destroy completely the dark or the light; however, you can reduce one or the other but never destroy" - you repeat the bit about not being able to destroy one or the other.
"This cause is call in my own knowledge “Dark in the light and light in the Dark”" - do you mean "called".
This is not much of a story, more like philosophical ramblings. I am interested in such matters but I don't think that this is the right way to address them. If they were based around a longer story it would work better, and please work on your grammar.
[Light & Dark
In the life, exist two ways: Light and Dark. Both Light and Dark, kind’s ways that can to have several reasons for acquire. Much light like Dark to depends one of the other. Anywhere is the dark, always is the light, and anywhere is the light always is the dark. None can to exist without the other. For this reason, you never can destroy completely the dark or the light; however, you can reduce one or the other but never destroy…
This cause is call in my own knowledge “Dark in the light and light in the Dark”]
this reminds me of yin and yang how one may be diminished yet cannot be destroyed because of the part of the other in it and the part of it in the other........ this is very good philisophical wise, needs a little grammer work though...... hope you do more of this stuff.....
I do not want the first pithy lines that pop into your head. I'm not interested in that. I want plot, real characters, sharp dialogue. Plan, dream, live your story, then write it. Novel writing is not for the impulsive. ~Kitty15
