Chionophobia #40 /P

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Incandescence
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:16 am
Incandescence says... · Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:16 am
Removed.
Last edited by Incandescence on Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:45 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Riedawriter23
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Wed Mar 07, 2007 1:55 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Wed Mar 07, 2007 1:55 am
You certainly know how to twist and turn a plot Brad. I mean, at first I was confused because even I was wondering...hasn't this happened before? But when I recognized that was part of the story I was extremely relieved. That was great. I mean, where is Jon, what's happening to him? It makes me want to find out!

And the ending just shouts: "What is Jon planning on revealing to these people?"

He could get Kyle in a lot of trouble if he wanted to, hell, I don't know who's side Kyle is on. lol, I love the mystery, there are so many possibilities!

Great Job!
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Emerson
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Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:27 am
Emerson says... · Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:27 am
and only a three folders
typo?


I feel like I'm reading LOST, only it gives me a headache... I'm starting to realize just how much I have to think about.
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