my favourte place

My favorite place is a place where no-one can find, it's a place like no other and it's all mine.
The trees sprinkle magic over me as the rain falls.
The wind dances through the trees and all around me, playing with the pages of my book, while singing a gentle lullaby to me to hush my thoughts completely.
In my favorite place i lay a million miles away from the world and its destruction, chaos and lies.
In my favorite place there is only I.
My favorite place belongs to me and me alone....
No-one can find my favorite place as my favorite place is my mind


my first ever happy piece of writing...can't believe i have written something happy...it is a miracle

As i already told you, brilliant, love it. I think everyone can relate to it, who doesnt have a small place in there mind that is there own. Where nothing of the world can reach.

yay my first reply for this piece of writing and it only took a couple of months!! hehehe thanks!!

Liz.... something happy??

You know I agree totally. Except my brain can be scary too....

I quite like this simply because it's uplifting but perhaps you could extend it a little bit? It just seems a bit short at the moment. Nonetheless it's simple and fun and cheerful, and they're great qualities for a piece to have. It's appealing, see. Good work.