Hi everyone, my name is Chloé and I’ve been writing for about three years now, mostly fantasy short stories, some of them pretty dark at times… I’ve never really dared to show them to my friends in real life because it always feels weird to share such personal stuff with people who know you. So I figured a forum with other writers would be the way to go. What really draws me here is the feedback on character development, that’s definitely the part I struggle with the most. Sometimes I feel like my characters come across as fake, and I can’t quite put my finger on why on my own.
Hello hello! Sounds like you've come to just the right place! I can definitely relate to feeling more comfy sharing work online vs with friends/family
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities. — Dr. Seuss