
The Lost Dragon
by soundofmind
by soundofmind
After achieving national fame as a war hero, James discovers the ugly truth about the Moonlight Kingdom and has two choices: risk everything to expose the kingdom’s corruption, or remain complicit in history’s biggest coverup.
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The Goal
I keep saying "this will be the last rewrite!" Well, here's to hoping this is truly the last. Let's consider this a third completed draft. Technically, there are two others that never saw completion, but this one I'm gunning for done and done.
That doesn't mean editing, revising, and fixes won't be due. I'm just hoping this is the last huge overhaul/rewrite, and that I can feel confident enough to start pitching it to publishers.
Right now I have 50k, and I'm a little over halfway through the outline. Act 1 is complete, Act 2 is half done, and Act 3 is outlined in hard strokes -- only details need to be filled out, but I'm finding in this draft that for the first time, things have been falling into place. It's nice when I feel I understand the story and characters enough that the story has begun to write itself.
My goal is 50k, but if I hit over/under, it's ultimately to finish around 100k.
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The Vibes
One thing that sets this story apart is that it will be like a graphic novel and a novel had a baby: there will be around 50+ comic pages used as a literary device to depict flashbacks visually, meaning you will get to see art of the characters. I also plan (eventually) on adding character portraits for the front of the book, title illustrations for every Act, and potentially, some splash illustrations here and there.
spaghetti-western fantasy / kingdoms
swords and guns co-exist / outlawed magic
moral crises and conviction / grief and hopelessness
anger > action / redemption
swords and guns co-exist / outlawed magic
moral crises and conviction / grief and hopelessness
anger > action / redemption
Have you ever had to rebuild everything you know and believe from scratch? Have you ever faced the consequences of your actions and realized you aren't the hero everyone said you were? Have you ever had to reinvent yourself while everyone else is trying to shape you into their own image? Then maybe you'll be able to empathize with the main character, James Hawke, who's struggling to do the same. The stakes are high. James has already made history once: the question is if he's willing to make it again.
Interested in beta reading?
I'm looking for beta readers who can sincerely devote time to reading and giving feedback to the full story. If the premise interests you, DM me!
