novmo 25: together, under this hideous sun

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"The madman is not only a beggar who thinks he is a king,
but also a king who thinks he is a king."
-- Jacques Lacan

The jukebox had been broken so long it had started collecting tips. A man ventures into the blistering emptiness of the Nevada desert to find his missing brother, rumored to have fallen in with organized crime. His only lead is a strange, tattoo-covered drifter he meets in a roadside bar, a man who laughs like a hyena and claims to have once worked for the syndicate that might've targeted his brother. Together, they hotel-hop through ghost towns and sun-bleached highways, following fragmentary clues and chasing whispers of an urban legend known only as the Jackal, an enigmatic "cleaner" said to appear in his victims’ lives before they vanish for good. When his companion’s past begins to unravel, the man must confront whether the monster he’s chasing is real... or already standing beside him.
Even trees understand me! Good heavens, I lie under
them, too, don't I? I'm just like a pile of leaves.

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already 3k words into this :smt003
Even trees understand me! Good heavens, I lie under
them, too, don't I? I'm just like a pile of leaves.

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this sounds so intriguing o.o also such a vibe-- this story seems like it'd be a great inspiration for poems and songs !! all the best this NovMo, mourronic!! ^-^
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Obsessed with this synopsis. Cheering you on!!
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

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THIS seems incredibly suspenseful and mysterious, I am intrigued! And a man who 'laughs like a hyena'? Terrific detail.
“It is always sad when someone leaves home, unless they are simply going around the corner and will return in a few minutes with ice cream sandwiches.”
- Lemony Snicket



[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
— GrandWild