Fly Dance

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The night swelters,
Hot and loud,
Alarms screech like electric cicadas
And frantic dusty wings grope for light,
A long day has passed ripe with beauty and ache
I've walked many miles but my right foot always catches,
And I trip,
And I fall,
And insects swarm and cling to a dirty bulb,
And I trip, walking a broken ballet
One foot light as bluebottle wings
The other lead and always dragged.
A moth eternally collides with light
But I must watch my feet.
"Ich weisse jetzt was keine engle weisse" Wings of desire




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walking a broken ballet? What does that mean?
When did I realize I was God? Well, I was praying and I suddenly realized I was talking to myself. - Peter O'Toole




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I know to walk a dance seems contradictory, but i guess i was trying to portray a kind of lurching broken elegance. Obviously not to much avail, cheers for pointing that out though i shall look over that in the second draft.
"Ich weisse jetzt was keine engle weisse" Wings of desire



'This must be Thursday,' said Arthur to himself, sinking low over his beer. 'I never could get the hang of Thursdays.'
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