April 25’ Camp NovMo | Days of D.R.U.(Sci-fi/Space Opera)

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Days of D.R.U.(Sci-fi/Space Opera)

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*Adult Fiction
*Reluctant Hero
*Ensemble Cast/Found Family
*Multiverse/Genre-bending
*Star-crossed Lovers
*Corrupt Organization
*Character Focused
*Forced to Work for an Evil Organization
*Complicated Choices: Even the Bad Guys Aren’t All Bad

Elevator pitch

Raiden, a girl who was born in a space in between dimensions, is found by the Dimension Regulation Units and registered as a “glitch”. The trash of the multiverse, with no home. She is partnered with three other glitches who have lost their places and identities. All they have is each other as they fall deeper into a struggle for control over dimensions, where she discovers her place is deeper than she expects…

Goals & Plans

If you participated in Camp Novmo of June 2024 or April 2025 you may have seen this project floating around. I am currently 43,000 words in at about the early midpoint of the story.

Last time I had a bunch of random plans floating around, but this month I want to focus primarily on getting some writing done. Since I have school and such I’ll keep the word count goal somewhat modest at 15,000 words!

I plan on giving some sort of update every week!
Last edited by goodolnoah on Mon Jun 30, 2025 2:15 am, edited 4 times in total.




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This whole concept sounds really cool and I’m intrigued! I’ve always had a soft spot for stories with different dimensions and found family trope!
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Wait a dystopian-esque space opera?? This sounds so cool!!
And yay for basically being at the midpoint! I wish you lots of happy writing and time for balancing with school :)
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Complicated Choices: Even the Bad Guys Aren’t All Bad

love this! :3

good luck and have fun, noah!! :D
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Thank you all of y'all! I'm not really sure what exact genre I fall into, @Carlito I think Space Opera is probably closest to a multiverse narrative, so I went with that!




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Hey hey!

4/4

Tasks Completed:

-Created a new character for a plot!

As I was expanding a story line I realized I was sorta...missing a minor antagonist. They will be helping our two main antagonists in taking down the corrupt organization of D.R.U. as they gather allies. They will be the first and most important ally, and will allow our two antags to grow closer to eachother. Here is some sketches I did for them.

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They are a random species I made up called "Liren". They likely have many followers or fans because they are the undefeated fighter at the Magnetor Coliseum.

I'm thinking a name for this character could be smth like "Overture"? Not sure...

-Did some editing of old chapters

I read over some old chapters so I could make sure I was remembering everything well!

-Began chapter 9!

I really only wrote about 200 words thus far, but chapter 9 is about 2000 words in anywho...Hopefully with some free time I'll write some more this weekend.

Wordcount/progress:200/15,000

So many words...
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Ooh art to accompany the novel writing!! Awesome!
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I think I'll start doing daily(ish) updates, since my friends here seem to be doing so.

4/8
Words Today - 353
Progress - 1525/15000
Extra? - A line!

"Radio felt a twinge in the air. They began searching around to see if something was catching his leering red eyes. Despite their attempts to hide in the dark, he was locked on.

His voice echoed across the liminal space. “I see you.”




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4/9
Words Today - 350
Progress - 1890/15000

I think I'm going to do a little writing sprint today since *gasp* I found out I don't have work today!




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4/10
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Progress - 3823/15000
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"Mara wandered through the hostile streets of the coliseum. She was bombarded with new smells, gravity, and voices. The sensory overload was immediate, like a jackhammer gouging through her head. When she was a universal overlord with Sky, she felt a sense of power and superiority over everybody she came across. These aliens did not recognize her power, and it felt stifling."

Overall, I felt like I was falling behind, but once the night was getting old, I had to LOCK IN to finish a particular set of scenes.




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4/12
Words Today - 1625
Progress - 5440/15000
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Sanguia responded monotonously, “Yeah. I’ve just got a little slug that attaches to me every once and a while.”

Feels like I'm pretty on track to achieve my goal! I call this a win!




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4/19
Progress - 5484/15000

Nothing much done to be honest in terms of writing. I don't have much time and its the end of the semester so school is BUSY!!!

Either way, I ended up making a design for a character who will be a future antagonist. She's supposed to be an inverse to my protagonist, and she'll be a vehicle used to show my protag's growth!

Her name is Terra Lorenza, she abandoned a group of alternate versions of herself to carve her own path, and she greatly misses her original world that she was taken from so long ago...

She melted down powerful armor and had her skeleton lined with it, making her highly durable!

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Also, the reasons I am adding new characters as I move along is because the middle of my story is probably the section with the least planning done. These new characters are more to push the central characters forward in their efforts.




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4/20
Words Today - 2685
Progress - 8131/15000
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“See this? My hair’s red. You’re a natural blue. Special. Just like me. I’m gonna beat you into the ground, and if you can stop me, maybe we’ll know what color is better.”

There's this scene where my protagonist gets beaten into the ground by the character speaking here. Pretty metal?

Pretty good progress though!




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4/21-4/26
Words Today - 3232
Progress - 11380/15000
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Raiden felt a lump in her throat looking at Kitty’s face. Despite being in her thirties, she looked tired. It was like wrinkles formed around her mouth from the amount of time she’d spent frowning or crying. Kitty gave a selfless smile of contentment before giving Raiden a hug and helping her into her pod.

I'm happy with the process...Let's see if we can SQUEEZE in an extra 3000 words within the next five days. I think I can pop off!!




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Overall I think I made some good progress, but I didn't quite hit my goal, and that's okay! Finals really had me down so I didn't have much time during my last week.

Either way, I got fairly deep into the next arc of my story. So all smiles here!



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