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Given the fact that im alrady sorta doing this i figured id make a forum so i get to get fun badges cuz yknow. fun.
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DOUBLE AGENT*

*working title

Action

Friendship

TimeTravel

Spy Thriller

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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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Elevator pitch

Top Agent Verena Laufy and her operative James Jameson are sent back in time by the Agency. A top their secret agency of spys and assassin. Their mission? Dispatch the second in line to the throne, sending the countries future spiraling downwards. Upon their arrival, Verena as the Crown Princess lady in waiting, and James as a chauffeur, they start to learn that there may be a lot more to this whole mission and little country. Especially when they start receiving cryptic notes from someone who seems to know their real identities.
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Agency Characters

James Jameson
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Generally seen with a sugary confection nearby, this young operative has been with the Agency since he was a child. Sporting moss green eyes, tanned skin, and soft but fit features, he's Verena's getaway driver. With skills that could easily land him in the winnings of a NASCAR race. He has a sunny disposition, and a love of humor and wit. His favorite feature is his ight brown hair that he keeps just long enough that a strand or two can fall over his forehead, but short enough that he doesn't get a telling off from the Director.


Verena Laufy

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A woman of shadowy disposition, Verena is the Agency's top agent, incapable of failure and highly requested by clients. This ghosty skinned, intimidating top agent, has been with the agency since she was a small child. She has no memory of any other life. She sports her shoulder length hair, that many imagine is as dark as her soul, in two braids pinned close to her head. Her pale gray eyes, whose glare may only turn slightly sarcastic at a certain driver of hers. Speaking of sarcasm, it's her favorite term of speaking. Although many will take it literally, which is understandable since you should probably be a little bit afraid of her at all times


Doctor Theodore
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There really isn't a good story without some frazzled strange figure. This stories takes the form of a short middle aged man, with a weathered face framed by frizzled gray locks of hair. He'll listen to all your stories gladly with dark green eyes hollow from life, that disappear when he smiles. They're often covered by old aviator style glasses from a bygone age, legend knows if their even the right prescription. He's the agency's resident “crazy scientist” that they hide in a basement. Lit solely by sterile LED light bars slung from a cement ceiling. How he ended up there nobody knows.



The Director
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A Shadow figure, the sole heart of the Agency. As far as anyone knows he's been around since it was founded, which could have been centuries ago. This nameless figure has little known information about him, except for the fact that his dark skin and equally as dark eyes strike fathomless terror into a lot of hearts. He runs the Agency with an iron fist, keeping the clients happy, with some persuasion if he believes it necessary, and Agents and their operatives in their prime.
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Day one (updated on day two)
Yesterday's tasks be ause I was too tired to update it then.
-started outlining
-stared at the outline
-tried to make it make sense
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Fixed the outline line! Here's what I've got for the basics.
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1. Opening Image (0% to 1%) –
-We see a mission that verena and James are currently on, set up their daily life in the agency. Also pstd starts

2. Theme Stated (5%) –
-james says something about
That you can fail.

3. Setup (1% to 10%)
-new mission assigment etc

4. Catalyst (10%) –
-pstd sets in, Or something happens to james
5.Debate (10% to 20%) –
-she has to work, but also pstd Issues but she can get over it. But also mission work she can’t fail etc

6.Break Into Two (20%) –-works thoyghtI besides this mission will be a breeze and a breka

Act 2A / The Middle (Part 1)
7.B Story (22%) –
-arch duke

8.Fun and Games (20% to 50%) –
-Verena is blending into high society well, her mission is going to plan, past has been amnagable.
9.Midpoint (50%) –
-pstd leaves for a few nights,

Act 2B / The Middle (Part 2)
10.Bad Guys Close In (50% to 75%) –
Pat’s gets worse, interrupts her mission work pressure from agency Julian and James etc

11.All is Lost (75%) –
-pushee to a point where she so desperate to not be crazy she almost comtpetees the mission then and there

12.Dark Night of the Soul (75% to 80%) –
-mayhe I can’t do you his and that’s okay?

13.Break Into Three (80%) – A single scene beat where the protagonist realizes what he or she must do to fix not only the external story problems but more importantly, their internal problems as well.
Break into three:She finally follows through on James advice and Julian’s and leaves on her own terms
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Day two
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James...
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WHERE DID YOU FIND THIS ACTUALLY VIDEO FO JAMES??
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DayThree: character arc outlines plot outlines scene plotting so much technical work ahhh
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wait did you draw that cover?? because if so that's amazing!
best of luck with draft two this month!!
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Yes I did!! Thank you!!
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