hello everyone!

I love to write and have been doing it for half my life, no one really sees my work, so I'm hoping people will see my work and help me expand it and help it grow more.

Thank you for your patience, and I hope you enjoy my first work.

Land of magic
Genre:
Fantasy and adventure/action

Estimated time:
45 min

Description:
A young girl named Ari has her home torn apart by the kingdom she lives in. fulled by the hatred the crown prince exacts his revenge.

Word count: 11734 words approximately in this short story.

16+ please as it may contain some language.

Thank you for reviewing and have a wonderful time reading.

I was searching for ways to request for a review.
Then I came across this.
Please give me a very, very honest review on my short story (the link is given below).

Positive reviews encourage you to go on while negative reviews helps you to find out and overcome your weaknesses. So, I need both.

Thank you.

Ayna - The Mirror

Hi!
If you could review this, that would be awesome!