Flawless Reaction

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Soothing from the AC,
a chill flowing from the fan
Transparent yet noticeable
creeping behind a sweaty back,
-hair stands straight
goosebumps rage-
the mellow shock contaminates,
the body as a building
Set to quarantine,
incapable of breathing in
slowly fading away;
-body regenerates-
Returning to faze one,
before the reaction,
created by the wintered chill
Back to the dessert
where the only sweat
Lies deep inside
this glorious obstacle
our Gods creation
Last edited by Chandni on Sat Dec 09, 2006 1:53 pm, edited 3 times in total.
I should not keep on, I'll just creep on creepin'on.




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flawless..

Ik heb flawless opgezocht en het betekent perfect en 'watertight'. Welke van die twee?
volgens mij perfect..

waarvoor zijn die -""-?
sla regels over

had zin :P




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hahaha ik wou persee geen stanza's schaap :P
I should not keep on, I'll just creep on creepin'on.



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