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Cleo smiled and scooted back some, and offered Hope a hand to help pull her up.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

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She took it, and climbed onto the sragon.
"Let's go!"
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Starlon made sure they were settled, then he stretched out his enormous wings and jumping in the air, flapped his wings hard and they were soon flying. Cleo let out a yell of excitement.
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"I NEED THIS ON EARTH!!! ALSO CANDY!!! IS THERE CANDY IN THIS WORLD?!?!!!" She screamed, actually concerned on this matter.
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"Is that really a concern right now?" Cleo asked. "Besides, I'm sure there is some sort of version of candy."
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"YAY!!! CAN'T WAIT TO TRY IT!!!"
She was shouting really loud, and was amused when should heard that Cleo didn't. Only because of that did she shout this time.
"OH! LOOK! LAND!!!"
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Cleo screamed with joy as Starlon banked steeply and landed inside a high stone wall, but outside of a fortress/castle looking building. There were guards and dragons and shragons and little baby creatures and even a few dogs and cats around. Some were training, others were doing rounds, or eating or sleeping. Cleo suddenly realized that she was famished.
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"Sooooooooooo cuuuuuute!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed, nearly falling off Starlon to run to the babies.
"But where are we?" She asked, nearly crushing a little white furry creature.
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Starlon chuckled as the little furry white creature jumped up and licked her. "This is my home, the kingdom of the south. Come, I will take you to our ruler."
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"Ok!" She said, still "Hugging" the creature. She followed Starlon.
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Cleo walked a little behind, stomach hurting. Something bumped against her shoes and she looked down.

"ooooohh" She gasped, picking it up. It was a baby goat. "It's chosen you." Starlon said, "Just as the luck puppy chose Hope."

Cleo picked up the baby goat and it nuzzled her, grunting happily.
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"Ooooooooo a lucky puppy? What does it do?"
The puppy licked her.
"Besides being ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!?!?!"
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"It brings you luck. Nothing life-ending can happen to you as long as you have it and it has chosen you. It's like a luck dragon, except that it can't fly. All of the luck dragons are extinct though." Starlon stopped talking as a giant tear fell onto the ground. Cleo stepped up hugged him, rather awkwardly
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"Ooooooo! I love this soo much!!!! Wait, what was that?" She pointed at the tear.
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*starlon's tear.* Cleo put her answer silently, inserting it into Hope's mind.
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akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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