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varada6467
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Sat Nov 17, 2018 11:14 am
varada6467 says... · Sat Nov 17, 2018 11:14 am
Hello everyone.
I am Varada, from India (Rajasthan).
I am in grade 9
I am studying international cirriculum.
My English is good enough

I have posted 2 of my stories on this site.
Those are chapters from a novel that I have started to write.

Chapter 1 Jigsaw Jumble
Chapter 2 Shreds of Evidence

PLEASE REVIEW IT FOR ME.
I also request you all to please comment on how I can improve what I have written so that it creates a good novel. :D :D :) :pirate3: :pirate3: :smt001 :smt002
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FireSpyGirl
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Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:13 pm
FireSpyGirl says... · Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:13 pm
Hi there!!! Welcome to YWS! Let me know if there is anything I can do for you, and I will try to help.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart
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Iggy
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Sat Dec 01, 2018 4:44 am
Iggy says... · Sat Dec 01, 2018 4:44 am
Hey there Varada and welcome to YWS!
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
- Lewis Carroll
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