One Word Poems: A Discussion

One Word Poems

I've moved One Word Poems to the Writing Activities forum. This thread is now for any discussion regarding the poems we're creating!

At the end of each poem we make we can have a discussion about it in here

Happy writing!

I keep contemplating putting another word in the poem, but can't settle on one that seems like it fits.

"night" -> would set up a rhyme scheme with "light" so maybe should be avoided

and

"sky" and "horizon" seem too small if we're talking about something going across like "apocalyptic galaxies"

Hmmm, I see the struggle. Maybe something that relates to a constellation?