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Sorry. Just woke up. I'm on Spring Break this week so I'm taking advantage of being able to sleep late.
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@Daenyss I'm on spring break and I'm spending to all waking up 6:30 (which is 3AM where I'm from lol) so lucky
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Oof. I just woke up at noon, so...*heaven.*
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My phones at 1% I'll write when I'm back in my hotel
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By the way. The reason Sofia is so extremely moody and have so little control on her feelings is borderline personality disorder, except in the story she's never been diagnosed, so it runs rampant.
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I don't really know what to do so I'm just trying to make Sierra seem like the opposite of Sofia.
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Sorry for the long wait guys. Got it, finally, and it's a bit long so you guys can play around with it more.
"For with much wisdom comes much sorrow; the more knowledge, the more grief."

Ecclesiastes 1: 18




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Just to explain Sofias character more, she has bpd, and because of that her she has a hard time separating her thoughts from reality. Normally she's iffy about hurting peiple,but she will because she won't admit to herself but she enjoys it, and when her emotions overwhelm her, her thoughts fully take over and she's pretty much emotionless except for one emotion, and when that anger she'll have no limits on what she'll do.
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Yeah, I get it. It's pretty cool. I'm not sure how Math will react, since he doesn't understand mental illness too well--so your character is basically on thin ice with Math right now, so I don't know why he wouldn't kick her out.

@Daenyss , you want Sierra to save Sofia here? I'm going to write Math being angry, if you want Sierra can come in and tell him that Sofia's mental state. Otherwise, I'll have to find some other reason why Math isn't going to crack the girl's neck in half.
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Well he grabbed her hence why she reacted like that
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Sierra doesn't know about Sofia's mental state, and they really don't like each other at the moment, so I'm writing a completely different scene over here. It's really a continuation of my contrast of Sofia and Sierra.
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Really short post,but she passed out in it so
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Right. I'm sending her to the W A R D before the mission and we'll figure things out
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Math

He considered Sofia's puppy dog eyes, and realized he'd feel bad if the girl died because he couldn't make a good choice. She was going to get herself killed, obviously, so he couldn't bring her directly into the mission. But he figured she'd find a way to get herself shanked regardless.

An idea popped to mind.

"Right," he smirked, "You've got a real knack for flirting, don't you?"

Sofia looked at Math. "W-what about it?" she asked, defensively. Then she grinned like a cat. "What? Do you like me?"

He chuckled. He made sure it was low and deep, just enough to sound seductive, but not enough to be a confirmation. "Maybe," he said, "But I think your looks and intelligence could lead us out of this problem."

"How so?"

Math explained the same problem he explained to Rose, and Sofia's eyes dimmed. "Don't tell me you want to pimp me out to some dealer?" she snapped.

"What? God, no. That boy is as loyal as a lapdog," he chuckled. He knew any man dumb enough to love a Nuestra offspring had to be too thick in the head to be anything but loyal. "Nah, nah. I want you to find some way to frame the girl for cheating."

(Ok so this is my current post. Its a pretty drastic change and I don't want to break Sofias characters, so thoughts, kat? I'm not posting if you don't approve.)
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No it fits with her, if it was any other character but Math saying it she wouldn't even consider it but her bpd makes her think that whatever her favourite person says is right, that it's like word of god pretty much. So yeah, it works
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I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss