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Swottielottie · 2006-10-19T17:13:36Z

Lilly white skin Dripping with blood Unmoving muscles Still as the dead three hacks to the head axe on the floor An empty shell left behind on earth Memories faded, knowledge gone One life spent in jail another lost at 16 Who likes this?

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Wed Dec 27, 2006 5:06 pm

Swottielottie says... · Wed Dec 27, 2006 5:06 pm

this is the worst poem I ever wrote
so I agree that is is rubbish

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