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HelloPeople
I like writing science fiction stuff and that is really it
come and gimme a review and suggestions




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Hey there, Captain, and welcome to YWS!

I happen to loooove reading SciFi, so you've got a follower in me! The best advice I have for attuning to YWS is learning to review properly, and the best way to learn that is a thing called the Review Sandwich. So it goes like:

Bun
Veggies & Meat
Bun

and we turn those into

Things you liked about the piece
Ways the author can improve the piece in your own words. Think critically!
Your overall impressions! Good, bad, reminds you of your Aunt Connie?

And that's a basic review! If you crank these out (without copying others or pasting your own onto work after work) you'll get fair points that'll let you post your own work in the publishing center for your own reviews! It's a giant circuit that keeps on giving!

I hope you love it here, CP! I know I do. :)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.




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Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here and if you have any questions, you can this color, this color, or this color! I can't wait to see your work throughout the site. :D
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom




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I am indeed a person! :P and I say hello to you as well!
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
- Lewis Carroll



I'd be a quote vigilante. A literary Batman. Someone had better be quoting me now!
— Feltrix