March Lines

Springtime's breeze sets grasses dancing,
Waving, bending, twirling round.
Springtime's sun works warm entrancing,
Coaxing flowers from the ground.
Birds with trilling, warbling song,
Brook with current swept along;
Maidens blush and lovers long,
And new love and life are found.

that is sooo sweet and cheerful. the rhythm is very well done too.
i loved these lines
"Maidens blush and lovers long
And new love and life are found."
*hands her a box of chocolates*

Short and sweet, nice rhyme and rhythm. If it had gone on too much longer, though, it would've gotten slightly annoying. Just too HAPPY, you know?

But nice work!

Yay, chocolates!
Thanks, both of you *blushes with happiness*

Cool! Great piece. I like the clever rhymes and the precise words. Not too lengthy or anything. Short and sweet. Paints a great picture, and it gives readers the image, as well as the feeling of new found life and love. Write on!