Jurassic Paradise DT

256 posts1 ... 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16 ... 18
User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
No worries, Lefty :)

I'm fine either way. However you decide, Alex should be killed after she finds Polk's dinosaur embryo capsule thing (probably after he's dead, so they can go through his stuff) and explains what it is.
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3819
Reviews 93
Ok, I would be fine putting that explanation in except that... I don't know what it is. :P Polk supposedly had some kind of alterer plan/motive having to do with the capsule, right?
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
Yes! I think we were talking about him having some connection with the military, who still want to train dinosaurs for soldier use. Polk could have agreed strongly with this plan, and offered to regain the capsule for the good of his country (while also checking out the island for his own use, or maybe for dino training grounds; who knows).

In any case, once he's dead, the only physical evidence for his motives is probably the capsule itself. At the moment, if we don't decide on any motive for him, the only thing the characters need to figure out is that he had something else up his sleeve and therefore the expedition on Isla Nublar wasn't entirely honest.
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3819
Reviews 93
Ok, I can definitely work with that. Thanks, Wolfie!
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 24185
Reviews 299
Yaay, it's good to see we've got this SB started up again (and I love the new post; well done, @LordZeus. It managed to be exciting, dramatic, and tied together the main plots of the story nicely)!

Okay, so, I'm not sure if I can write a post at once. I'm already expected to write for at least one SB, and my 11th grade schoolwork has proven to be a rather large challenge in and of itself. But, I can hopefully find the time to at least start writing sometime during my next school week. Should I have Nigel see Ax and call for help, or will the amount of time it takes Ax to get there warrant that I post later, or have at least one post in between? What do you guys think?
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
@TheForgottenKing, are you thinking about posting soon? I'm thinking you should post after Lefty and before Fox, but if you don't have time to that's okay. :)

Whether or not King can post, Fox, I would think that by the end of Lefty's post, enough time would have passed for Ax to find Nigel.
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3819
Reviews 93
Posted! Sorry for the wait, guys. It's quite long. Let me know if you'd like me to change anything!
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 2470
Reviews 39
Whatever Works for you @TheSilverFox. I'm not picky about what happens next.

BTW, great post @LeftyWriter!!!!




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2
Reviews 47
@leftywriter , you're the bomb girl. That post was amazing!
How the hell are we suppose to look forward to the future if we aren't sure if we will be alive in the next 20 seconds?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
Agreed! Time and time again, she's proven that she's the master of action scenes. I would have never been able to think of such creative scenarios and death scenes for those two characters.

The doors took their time, leisurely closing with grace as if it didn't know a fourteen thousand pound dinosaur was about to end them all.

^loved that, @LeftyWriter, among many other things in your post!
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3819
Reviews 93
Aww, thanks guys! Glad you liked it!
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 2470
Reviews 39




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
King or Fox, I think.
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 24185
Reviews 299
I remember that our posting order was supposed to be King, and then me? It's going to take me a while to find the time to write, though, thanks to school. <.<
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
Hey guys! Unless someone else wants to jump in before me, I plan to write a post this weekend. ^^
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified



Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five-year mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before.
— Captain James T. Kirk