I need people to review my poem

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I need people to help review my poem, it's called In the fields and is a historical fiction. Here is the link :)

In The Fields




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"Words say little to the mind compared to space thundering with images and crammed with sounds."

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The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone