Laurentine Reviews: Let's Start Right Away

I think I have all the time and opinions to help you out with your craft.

I would review:
Short Stories
Poems
Essays
Novels (I would highly recommend you to send me the first part/chapter of your novel)

I can't guarantee and number of words but I could ensure you with helpful critiques

Hi Laurentine, Felistia here.
It would really be helpful if you could review my novel Search for the Ruby of Fire. It is a fantasy, action\adventure and a fanfiction. The characters in the story are dragons.
Here is the link https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-edited-124445
Thanks for your time and have a nice day.