Reaching for my third star: Reviews by Flash!

Hello, I'm Flash. Here's a bit of information about my reviews.

Style:
-I try to help the writer by pointing out all the grammar and technical issues I can find. Then, I will go over story content, characters, etc. Warning: I can be nitpicky. And I promise I'll always have something nice to say. I'm not blunt or mean.

What I will review:
-Short stories (if multiple parts please link to the first part first!)
-Novel chapters (if you give me a certain chapter number, please link me to the first one first!)
-Almost any genre
What I will NOT review:
-Poems/lyrics
-Heavy romance (light romance is okay though)
-Works that include heavy language

Help me get my third review star! I look forward to reading your stories!

Note: It may take a few days for me to get to your review. But I promise it will get done.

Any takers?

Hey Flash, I'm writing a sic-fi story and it would be nice if you could review them. I have three chapters in total, but this is the link to the first one.

Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1

Can you review the first chapter to my novel? I would really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)

@yizhongt and @psudiname I will review both of your stories as soon as possible! (When I have access to a computer)

@yizhongt and @psudiname Done! Hope you two enjoy your reviews. Sorry about the lateness of my review, psudiname. I really meant to have it done earlier.

Anyone else?

Well if you could review the other two chapters of Celestial that would be great. Plus you'll be closer to that third star.

@yizhongt I will do that as soon as I can. It will probably be later today or tomorrow when I get both of them done.