mastering.the.cut

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mastering.the.cut

I am heavy of the mind
and running out of ways
to understand the black leaguing
battalions launching greek fire
into my battlements:
armed with the old cracked men
and little boys their heads
already on pikes.

I splintered myself open,
rib-bones shattering at sudden
impact of centred trebuchets;
(scalpel in hand, to cut away
at heart and lungs.) to scourge the
scorched earth, to do away with
the yellow-sickly pulp.

cannon fodder, I’ve made myself,
I cannot escape that. but I am tired-
oh-so-tired, my limbs weak and worried,
of this dissension -

this fracas of mouth and mind.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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the yellow-sickly pulp.

These adjectives don't go with the mood.

Nothing useless left - you're too good.
Carpe Diem.




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Hmm... yeah that is pretty incongruous. I am going to try and find another image that works better for that,

Thanks honey.
CL.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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wow. I mean w-o-w. dude. Um, okay, I came here with the purpose of reading some of your stuff, since you've been so kind in reading mine, and now....yeah, I feel like bashing my head against a wall my stuff's no where near as cool as this.
i mean wow.
imagery--incredible, so very, totally there
rhythm--magnificent, everything flowed so well
what else is there to say? fantastic!
"In a sort of ghastly simplicity we remove the organ and demand the function...We laugh at honour and are shocked to find traitors in our midst. We castrate and bid the geldings be fruitful." ~C.S. Lewis



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