The Dreamland (2014 NaPo)

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I'm excited to try this! I love poetry and need to keep writing to improve and just to get writing again. I miss it.
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

I used to be known as thewritersdream, but now my dreams have taken flight




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Day 1

Nightmares

I watch quietly as the stars burst into a million pieces,

twisting and twirling before my now enlightened eyes.

The sky so dreary now filled with fire light, honestly, fire’s light.

I watch as the flames engulf the sky and nothing is but red;

red and blue and gold lining up in separate aurora's,

alive in it’s fire lit from, looking dangerous from where I stand.

Where I stand, is slowly disappearing.

The light becomes too much, it’s falling,

and so am I the ground beneath me gone.

My awe turns into terror,

something horrible has happened...

I’m falling.

My feet are unstable, but my mind is still there,

standing watching the stars bursting into life, but was it life?

Was it life or destruction?

I watch as my body drops into a pool of the red, and gold and blue,

I am the sky.


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Meaning:
I wrote this based on my fears/literal nightmares and how normally my dreams don't make sense. And I can tend to transform into different things, or people or objects. Also, a lot of times there is this uncertainty of what is really going on in my dreams, and that itself (the uncertainty, the strangeness) makes it a nightmare.
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

I used to be known as thewritersdream, but now my dreams have taken flight




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Day 2

In the rain

She was left on the road,
the rain on her skin was like
ice melting on an icicle,
she was cold, and it was melting her
away.

She stayed there though,
in the midst of the rain,
unable to move her body,
her arms; her heart
was the only thing that seemed alive.

At least it was not dead,
at least they did not leave
with her heart in their hands.

With that she felt stronger,
strong enough to move a little,
strong enough to wipe her tears that
suddenly erupted in the midst of all the
water surrounding her.

She started walking,
her feet moving one after the other
she couldn’t stop,
she couldn’t think,
she couldn’t breathe,
and yet, she knew she was alive,
her heart still beat within her
she was still strong.

Just getting stronger.
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

I used to be known as thewritersdream, but now my dreams have taken flight




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Day 3

Birth

closed eyes
silky skin
small breath
little chin
arms out
nose round
little hair
or none found
every breath
so precious
every moment
so memorable
they wait
for the scream;
for the cry
make its way
into the heart
of the one
who gave
birth

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This is a unique poem that I wanted to feel short, self explanatory. I started with just two words and irregular rhymes and continued on, making it just a bit longer. : )
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

I used to be known as thewritersdream, but now my dreams have taken flight




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Nightmares - ooh so I love the twist in the end with what the colors ended up meaning (the sky!) and
how you kept the colors moving throughout the poem, very interesting way of writing death! (I'm assuming like the blood and the turning into sky = death)

Birth - ooo nice experimentation here, short and brisk but still smooth! I think I like this one best for how clean and minimal it is <3 Great job!




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I really loved birth! It was like a lovely list that somehow fit into being a poem as well. Simple, but artistic and creative. I love it <3
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Day 4 - 9

Saturday

the dew on the yellow flower
shinned out to me like sparkling
gold that i can't keep but can see

how you light the morning with the
sunshine of your heart bringing me
closer to understanding the truth in

everything around me as i stand within
the field of yellow daisy's dancing along
with me mimicking my arms swaying

in the wind as i lose myself to the peace
of the river to air flowing through the sky,
what i would do for everyday to be today

is the day where my tomorrow is still
a day away and my yesterday is still
the day before i wake up to the light of

your smile.

**** **** ****

Smiling

I'll never forget
the first time
we smiled.
It was like the world stopped.
And it was just you and I.
You and I and your eyes glittering,
your lips parting,
your teeth showing,
and my heart beating recklessly.

**** **** ****

Bitterness

My eyes squeezed shut,
the taste collided with my hope
collided with my dreams
collided with my thoughts
collided and stole them away.

**** **** ****

Don't Wait

Wait for me,

unless you know
that you can wake up
every single day without me

unless you're sure I'm not
the one you need me to be

unless you feel nothing more
for me than you do for that sweet
little pup of yours

unless you think that I'll only be your
side interest, your second thought

unless you only care about me because
of what you get out of it, rather than because
I'm important to you

unless you think I'm just like all the other girls you
talk to, and know, if you think that I'm just "anyone"

unless you can go to bed every night without having
thought of me once during the day and did not think
to message me, to talk to me, because there are others

unless you don't love me

then don't wait,

I'll be gone.

**** **** ****

Chase me

Running away from the clouds
that chase me until I can run no more,

Splashing in a puddle on a raining day
till my feet go numb,

Dancing to various clothing store's music
until they leave me laughing on the floor,

those are the moments I live for.

**** **** ****

Imagination

When I closed my eyes
I was not in my room,
on my bed,
there was no yelling,
no shouting,
no fighting,
no tears,
no fear,
no.
I was in another city,
in another world,
I was a queen,
a princess,
solider,
fighter,
I was laughing,
singing,
talking,
smiling.

I was finally free.

*new*

Pitter Patter

The drips,
they fall like I did
to the ground, when I
thought it was all over.

They disappear,
into the world
below, like I did when
I couldn't bear to be seen.

The sound they make,
reminds me of a clock
ticking away the time I have left,
to make it right again.
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

I used to be known as thewritersdream, but now my dreams have taken flight



What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.
— Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian