Then I did some looking around for other poetry techniques that might enhance this poem. I found @barefootrunner had this lovely topic Kiss My Assonance - 5 ways to improve your poetry which has a lot of wonderful techniques.
But now I can't figure out how to incorporate them into an existing poem. I think I could write a poem using alliteration and assonance quite easily. But putting them into a poem that was already written is a bit harder because I have to mess around with wording.
So I'm wondering if you have any tips on how to incorporate some of the things in her guide into an existing poem?
And possibly if you want to get more specific you could help me pick out which one to try to put into this poem and how to do so.
Here's the poem
Spoiler
Through Her Eyes
"I want to be like you"
A little girl once said
To her daddy who replied
"I hope that never happens"
The father who was
Absolutely terrified
That his baby girl
Would take on all
Of his terrible flaws.
The little girl who
Could only see
All the good things
In her dear daddy.
If he would merely
See himself
Through the eyes
Of his little girl.
He'd find a man
Worth being like.
If she could understand
What her father meant
When he disregarded
Her compliment.
Then she could help him see
The man that she sees.
Because through the eyes
Of a little girl
He was twice the man
He thought he ever could be.
"I want to be like you"
A little girl once said
To her daddy who replied
"I hope that never happens"
The father who was
Absolutely terrified
That his baby girl
Would take on all
Of his terrible flaws.
The little girl who
Could only see
All the good things
In her dear daddy.
If he would merely
See himself
Through the eyes
Of his little girl.
He'd find a man
Worth being like.
If she could understand
What her father meant
When he disregarded
Her compliment.
Then she could help him see
The man that she sees.
Because through the eyes
Of a little girl
He was twice the man
He thought he ever could be.
