Forever Isn't Long Enough

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Heather_BlackCain
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:08 am
Heather_BlackCain says... · Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:08 am
Forever Isn’t Long Enough

Tell me why you’re here,
And then I’ll disappear.

It took awhile for me to see,
Why you always prayed for me.

Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to scream at you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.

Tell me why I’m here,
But then I’ll disappear.

It took awhile for me to see,
Why the nicest hated me.

Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to cry with you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.
The Gryphon said, "It's all in the Queen's mind-they never cut off anyone's head, you know."

-Alice In WonderLand (Lewis Carrol)
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Sohini
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:21 am
Sohini says... · Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:21 am
i found this a bit confusing but i liked the way the words are used!
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Hobbes : What mood is that?
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Shine
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Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:48 am
Shine says... · Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:48 am
That was preety good,Well done.

Keep writing.:)
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armonia
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Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:31 pm
armonia says... · Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:31 pm
I liked it, it was good. thought i too got lost in some places.
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