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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: There is a ship

    Brilliant description and metaphor. I really liked the love to hide/those who lied couplet. And I agree that there are a couple unnecessary commas (maybe some could be dashes, if ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Fox

    Major respect to you for the creativity of this idea, and the ingenuity it takes to write a poem with rhyme as fluid as this one's. For me, rhyming poetry ...

    May 23, 2013


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes