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Re: There is a ship
Brilliant description and metaphor. I really liked the love to hide/those who lied couplet. And I agree that there are a couple unnecessary commas (maybe some could be dashes, if ...
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: The Fox
Major respect to you for the creativity of this idea, and the ingenuity it takes to write a poem with rhyme as fluid as this one's. For me, rhyming poetry ...
May 23, 2013
