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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: There is a ship

    Brilliant description and metaphor. I really liked the love to hide/those who lied couplet. And I agree that there are a couple unnecessary commas (maybe some could be dashes, if ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Fox

    Major respect to you for the creativity of this idea, and the ingenuity it takes to write a poem with rhyme as fluid as this one's. For me, rhyming poetry ...

    May 23, 2013


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan