zinger1912

This a very nice story! A bit confusing at times but it had a good point to it. Liked it a lot!

I love it! But i think football for girls is called something like powder puff or puff ball, something along those lines. Is this a novel?? I really wanna know ...

OMG!! This soooo weird because I was going to upload a song wrote from a guy's perspective for my book *gasps and covers mouth* 0_o creeeeeepy Lol It was a ...

Am I suppose to laugh?? I think I'm suppose to laugh because this is total smart ass right here! I love it! I didnt find any mistakes sooooo GOOD JOB!

Hahahahahahaha this reminded me of the Dont Press the Button game on my iPod! I laughed so hard!! This is cooooll :D

Umm Hi there!! Umm I really dont know what's happening...sorry maybe you could explain that more. :D

HAHAHAHA NIIIIICE!!! :D

Haha this was My story!! Smartass and In Your Face! Take that moon!! Bahaha LOVED IT! Interesting, very interesting! Keep up the good work!

Sorry, Its suppose to be italics from 'golden room' to 'he muttered softly'. Yes they are all angels and Bethany is another angel who lied to Christopher and told him ...

I agree with germsieGal. 'All her petals have tore' i just didnt understand to well, But if what you were going was mysterious...YOU GOT THAT.

OOOO I WANT MORE!! Better get the rest of you story up here before i go insane!!

I love it!! It has so much feeling!! The short little sentences give ALOT of feeling but too many is kinda blah... But all in all a very good piece.

This is really good!! We all could learn something about this! Keep writing :P

The really reason why i wrote this was because i need to let off some steam and if it came of whiny, alot sometimes i like to whine and let ...