ziggiefred

thank you for the great advice. i will consider that next time

I like it. I feel calm and at ease after I read it. Like, I am under a shade or under a tree myself writing the exact same words. I ...

Interesting.

Wow. My only wish was for the poem not to end. what deep feelings. good description tools too. :)

This is deep. I like the way the poem loses you a bit and then gets you on track at the same time. Good job.