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Hello there :) Welcome to YWS! I'm going to sound repetitive here but the title is very disappointing. The contents of the poem have nothing to do with the title. ...

Hello there :) I really liked this a lot. Very gripping. I do not think it was confusing. I'm always a fan of flashbacks and you pulled this one off. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I will commend you for writing a poem of this manner. I like how you twisted your words in every line instead of ...

Hello there :) I think for a person who does not write poems, this was pretty well done. However, my biggest problem with this was the use of too many ...

Hello there :) There was a problem with you sentence structures. "Roses... Flowers for love..." The girl said (there should be a full stop here) (start a new sentence) as ...

Hello there :) I had no problem with you vocabulary, I thought it was just right. I'm going to take a wild guess and say this 'fire' is rage deep ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Your poem is pretty straight forward. I really liked the concept and the whole message, which is some pretty relatable stuff. However, I ...

Hello there :) First of all, I was drawn to this poem by the title. Although the poem is very witty and different, to me it was just too simple. ...

Hello there :) I'm also kind of tired of these posts. They actually have made everything so much complicated because of all the different opinions and the fighting is just ...

Hello there 'dude' :) Since you're an avid reviewer, I felt almost obliged to review one of your works. Anyway, on to the review. I really like the mood you ...

Hello there :) I thought that this was very choppy, all of it. Firstly, for an introductory piece, I am not drawn in. I mean, if this is a novel, ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I actually found no problem with the length. You seem to have covered every nook and cranny in the information department. Sometimes, as ...

Hello there :) The previous reviewer probably covered what I wanted to say. The first two paragraphs of the story are actually quite fact based. I couldn't tell whether I ...

Hello there :) I could really relate to this poem. I actually find myself with the same feelings on occasion. What I liked about it is how it transcended from ...

Hello there :) I kind of liked the poem. The idea was well thought out and you managed to make it into words without it being completely disastrous. There were ...