zeroZyra

Okay, sorry if this comes over a bit rude but you have a lot of work to do on your writing. There are many grammatical and some vocabulary errors. Also ...

First thing I want to say is that I think it's really strong of you to write this story. The way I see it now it's probably going to be ...

Wow, I got to say I'm amazed by the writing in this story. It's obvious you already have some experience writing. This grim universe you created with "monstrous" creatures who ...

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An interesting setup you got going here. Throughout the story I just felt uneasy about this mother figure, who is way to severe and secretive. A few remarks however, try ...

Heya, I want to return the favor seeing you helped me out. I saw that your story didn't have any reviews yet (at least when I saw it at 2 ...