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zelithon

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wishes (Aimed At Younger Children)

    I am sorry. My spell check did not work for awhile. I admit I have a problem with run on sentences.

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: "Our Jon"

    So you Did not get my message. Actually we should have paid taxes it was just more of the principle of the matter. tea and posh! I like iced tea ...

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Most Embarrasing Moment

    I read it it did have some problems, if you want my more complete opinions I posted them under it.

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Terry Pratchet

    Then you should totally read something by him! he is witty. oh so witty.

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Terry Pratchet

    yes sort of, I feel protective of my favorite books like a mother wolf feels protective of her pups.

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pickle Pete. Improv Story.

    You are getting better. Somehow remines me of certian parts in The Salmon of Doubt by Douglas Adams. Interesting and funny easpeashally the reality show part. (nothing to do with ...

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Terry Pratchet

    Great! You share my opinions only I am more protective. Plus I was so outraged I got a bit confuseing.

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Most Embarrasing Moment

    You should be an editor! I know I have a problem with run-on sentences. Actually I know about all of the stuff you mentioned but parallelism. Truthfully I hate grammar ...

    Oct 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: "Our Jon"

    its funny the way we portray it diffrently, we called it taxation without representation and you call it somthing like greed. I think that the reasons don't matter much, we ...

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Footprints into the sea

    i did not like the last line otherwise it was good

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: "A Tribute To Myself" Please read

    I love Myself and Myself at least claims to love me. Good poem, i know how you feel to an extent but it looks like i love myself more than ...

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Most Embarrasing Moment

    I am actually a specially trained chimp in a research facility and i am all alone because i have acquired a taste for other chimps

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Most Embarrasing Moment

    OK now that it is spelled basically correct can you criticize my actual writing please

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If I Died

    i fixed the spelling for the most part oh and it might be bad cause i hardly ever do poetry.

    Oct 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: "Our Jon"

    do you guys say dunno when talking? how often does America get mentioned? Do you study the revolutionary war? What do you think of the English losing to so little ...

    Oct 9, 2005


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