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*waves* Sorry to be a bit late on this, I’ve been out of town a few days. ^^; All right! I really liked this chapter, and I think it pulled ...

*sigh* Okay, sorry I’m so late about this. I was so busy with JulNo and my biology homework that I’ve sort of lost track of time. All right! Well, that ...

Thanks so much for your advice, both of you! ^_^ You bth bring up really good points. The only real problem I had was between the first and second stanzas, ...

OMG, I’m so sorry. I only realized this was posted a couple days ago. *worst reviewer ever* XD Anyway! Let’s get right to it! Have I mentioned before that I ...

Late review is laaaaate.... [broken record] Wow, what an awesome chapter! I really like how the prologue is getting tied into this, your plotline is definitely interesting so far. And ...

Hooray, more awesome! I’m really enjoying this story, so far, it’s been really excellent—compelling characters, great prose, an interesting plot. Great work. Really, splendid job with your chara

(actually...I kind of wrote them intending their relationship to have a romantic subtext, XD You know, it's funny, because I thought the same. The whole time I was reading this, ...

(and really, I love Crowley. And his car) XD Me too! He was my favorite character. Also, best burning car ever. Personally I loved the Aziraphale/Crowley pairing. XD Ditto. It's ...

Well, this is certainly a very promising first chapter! I do think it could use a little clean-up, but let's get things started on a positive note. Here's the good. ...

Eeeh? Eeeeeeh? EEEEEEHHHH?? Wow. This was a pretty awesome chapter. It left me totally confused and disoriented, but in a good way. I've got to know what happens next! Why ...

Aaaand I'm as late as ever. *eternal shame* “This isn’t about the French class you haven’t even been to in three years, Eric,” This phrase just sounds awkward to me... ...

I love how there's a brick on the cover of the book. XD Every tiny sound started to wear on my nerves. This sentence was a bit redundant, since you ...

Brilliant flames crept up into log homes. Trees were splintered. Villagers were racing to put out the fire. Smoke slithering into the dark, night sky and Aly was dumbstruck. The ...

More lateness from me! Gah! I'm sorry, I thought I'd already reviewed this. *forgetful* I’d only been there nineteen years, and I was still stuck where I’d started from – ...

Whee! New chapter! And a cliffhanger! How dare you! :P Now I really can't wait for more! ^_^ This one was great, you're really stating to develop your characters, and ...