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Thank you for the review!! ...Now let's see if I can answer without making such a mess...btw, that'd be just the story related ones, since he grammar errors are completely ...

It was helpful, thank you!! About the short paragraphs, I've been suggested to actually use them as short as I can 'cause I do tend to make them massive and ...

Thanks! I see, I'll see what I can do. Actually, I've begun to write like that (as in the third chapter), but I apparently forgot to edit the last two ...

Thank you!! I really do seem to have a lot of mishaps in the grammatical area but I do am trying to improve so thank you! Jajaja and don't worry, ...

Nah, I was born in panama and raised in Costa Rica. Just these two, but I do am probably going to pick up japanese sometime soon :) Yeah, I actually ...

Still, you really helped a lot. The chapter is already edited and I've gotten rid of all of those little mistakes. Thank you. It was actually quite instructive, for example ...

Thanks!! And god, grammar really is kind of chasing after me (holding a scythe and everything). Those are really a lot of mistakes on my part so sorry!! I really ...

No, but I just updated my Open Office, and changed its language. English is not my first language so I had the settings in for spanish. I don't know why ...

To write? A laptop, though I don't think that's what you meant. If it's about the online proofreader I believe I used Thank for the help, in advance. Oh, and ...

Oh my, thanks!! That's one of the few times my reviews have not been just about grammar mistakes jajaja yeah, it's sad but still. Do you know of any spellchecker? ...

OMG....Sorry for the triple post!! I answered from my cellphone so maybe something weird happened!...Anyway, I'm so sorry :/

Thanks! Regarding that, Im thinking about dividing more the sentences; break them more. And space it more, like hitting enter every three or four sentences... Do you think it would ...

Thanks! Regarding that, Im thinking about dividing more the sentences; break them more. And space it more, like hitting enter every three or four sentences... Do you think it would ...

Thanks! Regarding that, Im thinking about dividing more the sentences; break them more. And space it more, like hitting enter every three or four sentences... Do you think it would ...

It's simply silly that to see erros in my reply (-.-). Sorry about that, I answered back in the middle of a civic event at high school ...and from my ...