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Re: Effervescence
well pretty powerful. what i want to know is what you were thinking about when you were writing it this this a poem? because i bet it would make a ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: Effervescence
well pretty powerful. what i want to know is what you were thinking about when you were writing it this this a poem? because i bet it would make a ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: I didn't mean to hit submit
Holy shit dude. this is some powerful writing. is this a rough draft? the last stanza is the best, whoever said it is not doesn't know anything about poetry. The ...
Oct 25, 2005