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Hey everyone, I wish I could tell you all that I'm writing more on this, but I originally intended for this to be a stand-alone story, and I still believe ...

I promise to review this tomorrow. I don't have time right now, but if you'll PM me and remind me, I definitely want you to hear what I have to ...

Thanks! Chapter three is in progress. -youreit

Hey there! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I've been super busy. I liked this. Your main character seems a little cliche, because he's our ...

Thank you to all who reviewed this peice for me. It's been a while since I've been on YWS, and even longer since I've written anything. All the constructive criticism ...

I like this. It's like a whole new twist on the best friends in love thing. I want to know what she said to mess it up. Are you going ...

Thanks you guys! This chapter has now been completely rewritten and edited. Tear it apart nicely, please!

This chapter has been completely rewritten. Thank you to all of you whose reviews helped me so much! Enjoy!

Part Two: I liked the ending. It was sweet and dramatic at the same time. I also liked how your characters stayed the same to the end of the story. ...

Part One:

Thanks! It took me a while because I wasn't sure what to cut and what to leave. I also needed to do a lot of brainstorming and character development. Long ...

Thanks SO much to everyone who's reviews helped me to re-write this chapter and make it work! I know there's a lot missing now between chapter 1 and 2, but ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Rewritten and edited! Thanks for all the reviews! You guys are amazing!

This piece got me interested. It definitely needs editing, but the characters were intriguing and the plot made sense. I would add a few more descriptions, though. I can't quite ...