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Hello again n_n I like how we are getting more characters and they're interacting with each other. On that note, I'll have to agree with something that has already been ...

Okay, I'll start by saying I'm enjoying this story and it's got everything: good characters, an interesting setting and a plot that draws you in; it's involving and it's got ...

Hey there! I've been wanting to start reading this one - title is very attractive to me - and now I finally have, so here's my feedback: Overall, I thought ...

Hey there! First of all, I just wanted to say that your description was great and I thought I would definitely be into this story about a princess who has ...

I love scripts and how dynamic reading them is! I reckon, though, that some parts are just slightly rushed and maybe the changing of the setting is overdone here. It's ...

This is quite brief and direct. It's not hard to understand, like some pieces of work out there - such as very subjective poetry. However, you can imagine many different ...

Hey Zoom, I really like this first chapter, mate! Overall is very well written - I'd only polish some bits and pieces in order to improve the flow. An example: ...