youraveragewriter

You're most welcome

I really like your similar sounding lines put together. This makes for a fantastically creepy karma reeping story. So nicely done.

This sounds like an old-fashioned burnout to me. A rubber band can only stretch so far before it breaks. Same with us.

A hard lesson learned for Matt and highly relatable for me. I have learned to stay collected over the years .

This is a beautiful piece packed with intensive metaphors to display emotions of someone negotiating love. The rhyme and even line length made for a smooth, subtle read.